Leftfield Questions
How is a fallow deer like kitchen roll?
What mundane task would a living fallow deer do in a home?
How would kitchen roll be rewilded?
Catching up on Paul Brookes’ December challenge.

House centipede
We’ve always called them toothbrushes,
the zippy, bristle-legged insects
that clean out the cracks and crevices
in the walls, night workers,
scuttlers and scavengers,
killers of beetles and spiders,
picking their way through
the minutiae of house debris,
toothbrushes, tabby-brindled,
bottle brushed hunters,
yet I would rather the beetles
and toothless unseen mites.
Here are the guidelines for the #Rhupunt:
The form can be broken down into lines or stanzas
Each line or stanza contains 3 to 5 sections
Each section has 4 syllables
All but the final section rhyme with each other
The final section of each line or stanza rhymes with the final section of the other lines or stanzas
Helpful Links
https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/rhupunt-poetic-form
https://classicalpoets.org/2017/03/23/how-to-write-a-rhupunt-with-example/#/
It gives me great delight today to welcome back, children’s author, Lynette Creswell, to Patricia’s Pen. This time Lynette has come along to tell my readers all about her brand-new hoglet book Hoglets’ Birthday Surprise. Without further ado, it’s over to Lynette.

Lynette Creswell
It’s almost Christmas and a busy time of year for everyone. For some it’s getting those presents wrapped and Christmas cards written but for me it’s an extra special time. Last December I published my first ever children’s book, Hoglets’ Christmas Magic and introduced two cute hoglets, Prickles and Primrose. The hoglets were a magical success and I earned myself a new following of young hogleteers.

As a writer I wanted to continue engaging with my readers and leave a lasting impression. The positive feedback I received for Hoglets’ Christmas Magic far exceeded anything I had imagined.
Teachers, grandparents…
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Back in November I invited you to recap or visit guest features up to end of July 2022. Now Patricia’s Pen is back with more flashbacks, this time to the end of the year. Please re-visit the blogs or read for the first time.

Kicking Flashback 3 off for August2022 was Lucy Heuschen with the launch of We Wear The Crown. Through poetry Lucy shares her breast cancer journey with the reader. This collection is a must read.
Read Lucy Heuschen’s blog here
Next up for August was Damien B Donnelly blogging about his Parisian experience in his brand new collection Enough! Don’t miss a second chance to have a read.
Read Damien B Donnelly’s blog here
September2022 opened with Kate Rose and her new release Brushstrokes. Kate takes her inspiration from her surroundings. Nature, both the natural world and human nature…
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Paul Brookes’ chosen poetic form last week was the golden shovel. I’ve seen the name before but never understood from reading the poems what it was. Well, now I know and I’ve dutifully persevered and written some. The form is supposed to be more than just an exercise, but to demand creativity from the poet (aren’t all forms supposed to do that?), but I’m obviously stuck at the contortionist exercise stage because I’m not seeing much poetry in my attempts. Here is the poem I sent to Paul’s challenge. It’s based (pretty obviously) on the first line of Byron’s She walks in beauty.
Tree beauty
There are old men trees and some I call she,
wild women trees, shelter where the hind walks.
Breathe out and breathe in.
Tree-breath is powerful, and tree-beauty,
the powerful beauty of nature, like
mountains and rivers, ice-caps, the
lungs of the world, pumping…
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