Wombwell Rainbow Book Review: “Bleb” by Sanjeev Sethi

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“Bleb” by Sanjeev Sethi

Bleb by Sanjeev Sethi

One of the great positives for me when reading Sanjeev is the opportunity to increase my vocabulary. In each poem there is one or more words for which I need a dictionary. This is excellent because it puts the emphasis on meaning. This is especially true of “Bleb”, his new book out with Dreich. To me the poems deal with the separateness of people, of the reader and writer, the writer to the poems they write. Sanjeev calls these “wee poems” but they get larger with each reading. The first poem in the collection:

medic by sanjeev sethi

Speaks of the outside coming in. “Words cycle towards” him. He is “the doc on duty”. “the baby” is “the first draft” needs medical care. The creation of something outside himself that needs nurturing. This is one of Sanjeev’s major themes in the book. How poems become independent have a life of their own, but also deaths of their own too. The final poem:

newness by sanjeev sethi

Finishes with a sense of the positive “fresh urgencies”. He sees words as “empirical drills” to “decipher” the world and his relationship with it. I cannot recommend this work highly enough. He takes us back to the running track of the first poem. His poems are that “raw force” that “flow with fresh urgencies.”

I cannot recommend this book highly enough. At £3.00 it is a must read.

For Mr Paul Brookes ~Wombwell Rainbows~ National Insect Week , 21 – 27 June 2021 ~ The Prettiest Butterfly ~ A Letter to Nano ~

POETIC OCEANS

Grand children are nature’s greatest blessing and I am profoundly blessed Alhamdolilah.

When my illness and a major surgery became a matter of grave concern for the family,this love filled letter and art work made me cry.Tears kept flowing for long.
I realized how love flows from the tender hearts, instils new life with warmth comfort and peace, curing all pain and suffering.

The sweetest letter from my grand daughter Sana Fatima Mir (my younger daughter Mahwish D Haider’s daughter)

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Then by Linda Black (Shearsman Books)

Tears in the Fence

Describing her first collection,Inventory(2008), Linda Black drew a parallel between her writing style and her approach to etching. ‘As a visual artist (and art teacher),’ she said, ‘my process was to begin without a preconceived idea—to approach a blank sheet, or etching plate, by merely making a mark, with as it were a blank mind, to delight in the not knowing, the exploration, the opening up of possibilities.’ A matching openness to where words might lead characterised that first collection, and has been a hallmark of her poetry ever since. With each new volume, her writing seems to take more risks, the most recent book,Then,continuing this trajectory.

Memories, domestic objects, children’s games, fairytales, and the doubtful wisdom of common sayings are all grist to Black’s process. Word associations, puns, rhymes and alliterations are allowed to lead, the poem discovering itself as it goes along. ‘Call…

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#NationalInsectWeek 21st-27th June. Sunday – Dragonflies and other insects I may have missed during the past week. Anybody written poems about Dragonflies and other insects? Artworks/photos welcome too. References to poems/artwork other than your own I will show as links in the post, unless the referenced author welcomes my use of their work. I will add to this posts throughout today, so don’t worry if your submission has not been posted, yet. Here are the prompts for the week: Monday – Beetles, Tuesday – Cockroaches, Wednesday – Flies, Thursday – Mayflies, Friday – Butterflies, Saturday – Ant, Bee and Wasp, Sunday – Dragonflies, and any other insects I missed during the week.

Sunday – Dragonflies, and any other insects I may have missed.

insect week

Banded Demoiselle damselflyCommon Blue damselflyCommon Darter emerging 2Four-spotted ChaserFour-spotted ChaserSouthern Hawker emergingSouthern Hawker neawly emerged

-David’s photos

Dragonfly, a Pantoum

Your movement, never still,
enchanted dragonfly,
master of your craft
on fragile, gauzy wings.

Enchanted dragonfly,
Whirring, quivering,
on fragile gauzy wings,
sparkling colours dazzling.

Whirring, quivering,
nature’s helicopter,
sparkling colours dazzling
like a shimmering gem.

Nature’s helicopter,
Art Nouveau jewellers’
shimmering gems
captured your vibrancy.

Art Nouveau jewellers,
masters of their craft,
captured your vibrancy –

your movement ever stilled.

-Jenni Wyn Hyatt

margarets dragonfly

Red Dragonfly by John Hawkhead

Red Dragonfly by John Hawkhead

Dragonfly by John Hawkhead

Dragonfly by John Hawkhead

Rachel deering dragonfly

-Dragonfly by Rachel Deering

Linda Ludwig Dragonfly

-Dragonfly by Linda Ludwig

ChristinaChin_purple dragonfly_Wombwell Rainbow

-Christina Chin

Before I


Before I break the Surface of the world
I live another life beneath where light
falls differently. I eat Small that curl
in front, while Larger see me tasty bite.


Hidden behind long stems I wait and wait.
Quick squirt of breath behind to catch the Slow.
Grab it with my hooks drag it to my gape.
Climb Up a stem and shed Old Skins as I grow.


Need forces me to break Surface in Dark
where I learn to breathe before final shuck.
Let limbs and wings harden into flights start.
He grabs my neck, I arch my back, Eggstruck.


I return to Surface, slice open stem.
Lay my eggs for life to begin again.

-Paul Brookes

Let Us Now Praise Ordinary Things by Kareem Tayyar (Arroyo Seco Press)

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Kareem Tayyar’sLet Us Now Praise Ordinary Thingsis an extraordinary collection that discusses how one can find fulfilling and long term joy through a balanced understanding of how to appreciate simple things against a backdrop of pain. I have long admired Tayyar’s work and his approach to life. It is not easy to write about appreciating life, and he is able to do so without becoming preachy or treacly. Instead, he looks into the essence of things and moments to understand them for what they are. He doesn’t ignore pain; in fact, he acknowledges it. What he dwells on, however, are the moments between moments that constitute joy. The final line of the collection sums up this philosophy well: “After all, there is so much to praise, and so little time” (103). For him, death is a fact and that lends an urgency to his appreciation of those moments…

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#NationalInsectWeek 21st-27th June. Saturday – Ants, Bees and Wasps. Anybody written poems about ants, bees and/or wasps? Artworks/photos welcome too. References to poems/artwork other than your own I will show as links in the post, unless the referenced author welcomes my use of their work. I will add posts throughout today. Here are the prompts for the week: Monday – Beetles, Tuesday – Cockroaches, Wednesday – Flies, Thursday – Mayflies, Friday – Butterflies, Saturday – Ant, Bee and Wasp, Sunday – Dragonflies

Saturday – Ants, Bees and Wasps

insect week

jeff skea bumblebeeCarnival by Lynn Valentinebumblebee by Lynn ValentineBlethers by Lynn Valentine

-All poems by Lynn Valentine.

BUMBLEBEE

A tricolored bumblebee, miniature engine,
revs up and slows down arrhythmically.
Alighting, abdomen curving in graceful embrace,
vacillating between sage blossoms,
a quick nuzzling exploration and then on to the next,
an industrious motor powered by fealty and pollen.

Relentless in its amassing, meticulous in its exploration.
I know it can sting, even as it follows royal edict.
I suppose I could wave it away, feigning fear,
annoyance, or an abundance of caution.
But in good conscience, its ancestors have been
on this planet so much longer than mine.

All it seeks to perform is its duty,
done to perfection, trafficking in pollen,
gentle fuzz and glistening wing,
a brief life curtailed by cruel winter.
I envy this orange, yellow and black beauty
Its distilled ability to live in the moment.

-Jeeks Raj

wasp by John Hawkhead

Fuzz bomb

There’s a fuzz bomb in the foxgloves,
there’s a buzz about the leaves;
a bumblebee has fumbled free
to zoom around my knees.

I wouldn’t be so nervous
lying out here on the lawn
if only I’d remembered
to put my trousers on.

Bizzies

I fear the cops
have pressed
the bumblebees
into service –

they’re out in force
wearing uniforms
and hi-vis vests,
knocking on windows

like badly-flown
drones, checking
we’re in lockdown;
hard fuzz battering

off the glass
and zooming away
in hot pursuit
of a sprung bluebell.

-Both poems by Andy MacGregor

wasps nest by Annest Gwylym

-Annest Gwylim (First published in The Projectionist’s Playground)

Sweet Pollen

-Paul Brookes (one of my insect sonnets first published in Fevers of the Mind)

I Forage


I forage, chew wood pulp for my babies
who give me sweetness in return. When
they’re bigger I’ll dismember aphids, fleas
and spiders to take home for them.

My queen who gave birth to me will outlive
me. At night I’m still, or repair fly
babies broken rooms. At warm light give
flight ,and scratch out fibre until I die.

I lay my own babies once, another
found out and ate them. I tend to my queen’s.
As light dims sooner and days get colder
I get slower, stiller, food for the dream.

It’s too easy, a mechanically
universe, reality is messy.

-Paul Brookes

Biogs and Links

Annest Gwilym

Author of two books of poetry: Surfacing (2018) and What the Owl Taught Me (2020), both published by Lapwing Poetry. Annest has been published in many literary journals, both online and in print, and in anthologies. She has been placed in several writing competitions, winning one. She lives on the coast of north west Wales with her rescue dog. Twitter: @AnnestGwilym

Now Voyager by Cynthia Anderson & Susan Abbott (Cholla Needles Press)

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Now Voyageris a collaborative project as part of Cholla Needles’ series of books that combine art and poetry and have included poets and artists like Cindy Rinne, Kendall Johnson, and David Chorlton. Anderson’s poetry is illustrated by Abbott’s art and the result is poems that are enhanced by the surreal nature of Abbott’s watercolor paintings and paintings that are given spiritual context by Anderson’s poetry. Anderson, who lives in the deserts of California near Joshua Tree National Park captures the reality of living in this wild and extraordinary place. Her poetry is at once a journey into the mystical as it is an appreciation for the natural worldand her relationship to it.

Anderson’s poetry is not universally positive; she takes a look at her own carbon footprint and anxiety about living in the desert where too many resources are being consumed by the people who love living outside the…

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#NationalInsectWeek 21st-27th June. Friday – Butterflies and Moths. Anybody written poems about butterflies and moths? Artworks/photos welcome too. References to poems/artwork other than your own I will show as links in the post, unless the referenced author welcomes my use of their work. Here are the prompts for the week: Monday – Beetles, Tuesday – Cockroaches, Wednesday – Flies, Thursday – Mayflies, Friday – Butterflies, Saturday – Ant, Bee and Wasp, Sunday – Dragonflies

Friday – Butterflies and Moths

insect week

butterfly in amber

Trapped

Are words trapped in books?
Not able to breathe free
Like butterflies in amber

Burnt sienna-gold beauty
Like verses strung together
Are words trapped in books?

Calligraphy black on white
Glinting in the light
Like butterflies in amber

An insect and words glued in woe
Are poems written in blood?
Are words trapped in books?

Seeping with anger, sadness
Poetry written,tears of grief struck
Like butterflies in amber

Or a balm of sweet memories
A cathartic torrent of words
Are words trapped in books?
Like butterflies in amber.

-Leela Soma

monarch butterfly
delivering a message
from the great unknown

-Richard Bailly

Island Sonnets 1: Rarities

The Slender Scotch Burnet Moth clings on
to this yellow bloom, this basalt cliff:
the fragile edge of a fragmentary life
confined to islands. Under the melting sun
summer’s haze shimmers over the sea.
There’s a threat of cloud in the west. The wind spills
a scent of gorse flowers over the folded hills.
This warm day’s a welcome rarity.

There’s so much peace in my heart it’s almost pain.
I’m bracing myself to withstand the next surprise,
which isn’t coming. Ever. Only summer lies
in the days ahead. I’m facing the curious, strange,
singular thought that it may all be over and done.
I cling to that fragile edge and bask in the sun.

-Yvonne Marjot

new dawn
a butterfly drifts through
the triumphal arch
(from the Nick Virgilio Writer’s House – Haiku In Action 2021)
-John Hawkhead

Last Night I Became an Emperor Moth

I rode through the liquid night,
as a melon-slice moon crested a bank of cloud.
Part of the hush and curve of the universe;
Pleiades above me a diamond cluster ring.
Clothed in starlight, wings powdered,
furry belly glossy and plump.

Left the moor for a jaunt to the seaside,
over towns with flickering lights and strange smells.
Saw the sea corrugated by waves,
tang of salt quickening my senses.
Shimmied and played chase with the ladies,
rested with them on marram grass.

Birdsong ushered in the return of the sun;
drowsy, went home to sleep in the heather.
There to wait for my lover; my musk strong,
it will draw him from miles. He will come,
wings taut with blood. Antennae fresh as ferns.
Owl eyes pulsing with life like coals.

Red Admiral in November

Tail-end of a storm squalled over
the Atlantic – leaves and plastics
hurled over yard and path
in a mad, improvised mosaic.

Then I see it, the slight movement
of a blackened leaf shivering
on top of a pebble right under
the next step of my feet.

Gently lift him on his flint –
he opens his wings out wide
as if to the warmth of my touch,
exotic in his gaudy tapestry.

Carefully place him on a nettle stem –
he climbs, fumbling and entangled
towards the leaves, lumbering his embroidery,
summer aerobatics a memory.

I lumber, fumble back into the darkening cocoon
of my shuttered house, summer a memory.

Cabbage White

In his robe of sun he cartwheels
over autumn weeds –
a last-fling pale ballerina
among the Caravaggio opulence
of October
and its red-haired children.

This petal-light cabbage white
flits among heady colours
distilled by autumn:
root beer, cider, burgundy, rosé.
He goes there, there, there –
from ragwort to herb robert,
catsear to hawkbit.

November brings brown,
sours ripe and fruity scents,
pungent with leaf mould and fungi.
A watery sun rises low;
branches like swipes of ink
on an eau-de-nil sky;
his lifeless body blowing
in the wind with the leaves.

Doorway . . .

. . . on the roadside:
fading burgundy frame,
scored ivory windows,
set in solid blocks
of local grey stone.

Sly fingers of ivy
creep darkly over one side,
like a face needing a haircut,
steal into gaps between timber
and stone, squeeze through
quiet breaches in dry wood.

For a second a butterfly
prints red and black on it,
folds its wings as in prayer,
opens out again, cutting
a butterfly shape in the air.

Behind the door, a shady space
where flowers don’t grow.

-Annest Gwilym(from her collection What The Owl Taught Me, 2020)

(Previously published in:

Cabbage White – Poetry Space
Doorway . . . – The Cannon’s Mouth
Last Night I Became an Emperor Moth – winner of firstwriter.com’s Fifteenth International Poetry Competition 2016/17.
Red Admiral in November – Reach Poetry)

Christina butterfly bleached butterfly

-Christina Chin

 

ChristinaChin_silk portière_Cantos2021 moth

Haiga

moth wings
raising the silk portière
summer breeze

-Christina Chin 

Debbie Strange Dying Moth

-Dying Moth by Debbie Strange

 

A Lime Hawk Moth M W

-M. W. Bewick

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Caterpillar Summer

One summer we kept caterpillars – nothing special, the green ones that attack cabbages. Maybe I got sick of killing them, the green mush between my finger tips. Maybe I thought it would be educational. We kept them in a propagator, fed them cabbage leaves, made sure there was water in there. Not many survived. A lot were attacked by some predator that ate them from the inside. The smell of old cabbage was vile. We persevered.

Finally we had a few chrysalises. We took the clear plastic lid off the propagator, and left the base tray open in the outside toilet over the winter. We forgot about them.

One spring morning, I went out to feed the cat, and opened the door of the outside loo. There were the butterflies, finally hatched – white-winged and fluttering. I called the kids and we admired them, and then let them fly away – to lay more eggs on more cabbages, I guess. To have their moment in the sunshine.

souls soar in spring
butterflies soak up the sun
green leaves unfurling

-Sarah Connor

A Turnip Moth in Fever

-Paul Brookes (First published in The Insect Sonnets, Fevers of The Mind)

Bios and Links

-Annest Gwilym

Author of two books of poetry: Surfacing (2018) and What the Owl Taught Me (2020), both published by Lapwing Poetry. Annest has been published in many literary journals, both online and in print, and in anthologies. She has been placed in several writing competitions, winning one. She lives on the coast of north west Wales with her rescue dog. Twitter: @AnnestGwilym

-M.W. Bewick

is a writer and co-founder of the small indie publisher Dunlin Press. He grew up on the edge of the Lake District, lives in Wivenhoe, Essex. He is regularly published in poetry journals, also works as a journalist and sometimes lectures in creative writing. His second collection of poetry, Pomes Flixus, is available at https://dunlinpress.bigcartel.com/