Ebb and Flow
Listen
Play the audio and listen to the flowing, rippling, soothing, mesmerising, meditative, calming water… Watch the video… Read the poem at a slo-w and tran-quil pace. Go with the flow, nice and sl-ow. Why not meditate? (or not).
Ebb
and flow
the
waters
go waving
ripples
rip
ripple
rippling
serpentining
with the tide
swirling
curves
curling
side-by-side
undu-
lat-
tory
calm
Lesley Scoble, June 2023
I wrote Ebb and Flow in the Waltz Wave Poetry Form as I believe the form lends itself to slow, calm verse. The syllabic pattern is: 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1. It is a single stanza poem of 19 lines, with each line having a set number of syllables. With the lines being so short, they make the poem form a long, slender, vertical shape. Like a narrow, slow-flowing stream. This form lends itself to best expressing a calm, trickling cascade… This poetry form is…
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Thank you, Wombwell Rainbow for the reblog 🩵
You’re more than welcome, Lesley. Lovely work.
Best wishes,
Paul
Thank you, Paul 😊