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Jane Draycott’s The Kingdom reviewed by Kathleen Bell

draycott kingThe Kingdom by Jane Draycott. £11.99. Carcanet. ISBN: 978 1 800017 259 3

In a world so recently familiar with grieving and isolation, and alert to the dangers of environmental disaster, Jane Draycott’s poems in The Kingdom conjure a territory that hovers just on the edge of experiences we might recognise, offering us a half-familiar sense of strangeness and estrangement. For example, a message of longing in ‘Wyldernesse’ announces:

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxI have entered
a new wilderness, – randomly generated
ravines, sunless abysses in the heart
of the financial sector, sirens throughout –
xxxxxxxxxxand am alone.
. . . . . .
I have asked the few strangers I meet
which way…

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Review of Gabriela Marie Milton’s Poetry Book Woman: Splendor and Sorrow: Love Poems and Poetic Prose by Spriha Kant

The beautifully gracious and wise poetess Gabriela Marie Milton needs no introduction so obviously, there is no room for any doubt that this book is mesmerizingly beautiful and has deeply heartfelt vibes. This book is a cradle of two clusters— Love Poems and Poetic Prose.
A fragment of words from the poetry “Henrhyd Falls (Annwn)” of the Welsh poet “Matthew MC Smith” contained in his poetry book “The Keeper of Aeons” is fit to evince the beauty with which this book shimmers and this shimmer has a thrust to mesmerize its readers:

“glint in glacier-ruins
where minnows flicker
in golden shallows”

The poetess has used personifications, similes, and metaphors in both poetries and poetic prose in different expressions.

She has adorned her few poetries and poetic prose with personifications, similes, and metaphors like a bride with jewel ornaments. Displaying a few jewel ornaments below:

“your voice moves stones in a lonely graveyard
to bury the tears I cry”

“Shadows tremble on the silence of the tombs like
virgins under the touch of their first lover.”

“A pink conch tolls the waves announcing the homecoming of
the chrysanthemums”

“stars rise over old memories of purple seas
like cherry buds”

“when cotton candy sunsets sing
I’ll deliver myself
in the arms of Morpheus
forever
and ever”

“During the nights
in which the moon is glossy and crisp like the crust
of a country bread, the woman’s body gives birth to
mountain chains and fragrant valleys.”

“I know he loved me. Yet his mind was too pedestrian
to understand.”

In the poetic prose “Of Wounds,” the poetess has personified the feelings of humans from a pessimistic angle. Through this personification, she pointed to human vices and the extremities of the adversities pushing humans towards vices. The words she used for pointing to the extremities of the adversities are like melting furnaces for kind hearts.
Quoting below the stanzas consisting of the personification of feelings of humans by the poetess:

“The Envy wears red lipstick and high heels. She
dances naked on a wooden table. At every turn,
she spreads poisonous confetti in the air, and she
lowers her eyes. I try to decipher the meaning of her
gestures. I cannot.”

“The Greed, with her childbearing hips, indulges
herself with poor souls who live at the margins of
the city. The children are hungry, and the mother is
long exhausted. The beds are cold, and the moonlight
enters the rooms through broken windows.”

Contrary to the pessimistic angle of the personified feelings of humans, the poetess has also shed a light on an optimistic angle. Showing below the optimistic face:

“Love and sacrifice are the consummation of all acts
that lead to the warm meal that one hands to an old
man who dwells in the streets during cold winters.
They are the sum of all unknowns. They are the
fingers that draw the light of stars in the darkest of
the skies.”

Each poem is a love poem with an ambiance of its own like chocolate with different flavors.

The poetess in her poetry “The Ides of October” added the flavour of the love of a mother by showing beautifully and in-depth how a woman reaches the seventh sky on giving birth to a baby. Replaying below one of the scenes containing a dialogue spoken by the poetess on the behalf of every mother:

“When I see cocoons of the larvae, I think silk as
soft as the hair of the child.”

The poetess in some of her poetries has added a philosophical flavour. In one such poem “You and I,” the poetess wrapped a new cover printed with her words around the fundamental nature of existence. Showing the cover below:

“a baby star looks down
impermanence of flesh”

In some of the love poetries, the poetess has added a gloomy flavour by including melancholy, hopelessness, helplessness, loneliness, regret, suffering, and tragedy in personal life and by also concealing the portion of the world submerged in the murky sea beneath the layers both through her few words and/or stanzas.
These represent the sensitivity, compassion, and awareness the poetess has.
Quoting below a few words and stanzas representing the sensitivity, compassion, and awareness of the poetess:

“I am neither a gift
nor something you can keep
I am the syllable forgotten on your lip”

“Eyes become the locus where the desert and the sea
meet.”

“I return to find the pardon of the sands
to kiss your dust left on your mother’s hand”

“your tired feet have walked the desert
thorns and thistles scarred your skin
squirming in a mire
enraged by liars
your nights of passions
felt like the apocalypse”

“Your face grows washerwoman skin.”

“kerf cuts your words left in my heart”

“I am as insignificant as a drop of blood floating
through the arteries of night.
Lost at sea the loneliness of sandcastles.”

“Roberto’s guitar sells cheap dreams by the sea
young girls are ready for harvest like flowers of lust”

“For three thousand years, sung by the poets of this
land,
the naked shoulder of the mountain reigned in
stillness.”

“you, my adulterated love
I light your fire
blindfolded I seek a buyer
for all my sins
for this September blood that I resold
and for the girl who once was me”

The poetess has added sensual flavour in some of her poems. She has picturized the sensuality beautifully, however, the expression differs in each sensual poem. Showing below the whole scene picturized in one of the sensual-flavoured poetries “Love Numbers”:

“We laid in the grass, shadows of poppies playing on
our faces with the same rhythmicity of the waves
on tranquil days.
At times we could feel the pulse of the new grains.
The line of my décolleté – as you used to say – nothing
else but the demarcation between inexorable
sins and the blushing tones of the sunsets.”

The poetess has recited a few of the prose in the form of a leaf with very few tiny dews. The leaf is the story and the dew is a tiny tinge of surrealism.
Showing a few words from one of the dewy leaves “Autumn Reflections” below:

“You waited for me at the end of the road. I felt your
hungry fingers unbuttoning my raincoat.

The children approached. Their little voices
pinched my brain like needles. Their thin bodies reflected
in your blue eyes.

I asked:

Can you see the children?

What children?

The children dressed in white. They are in your eyes. Why can’t
you see them?

Your fingers continued to unbutton my raincoat.

Lord, I must have been born on the day of children
who cannot be seen and cannot be heard.

I choked.”

There are a few tiny glints of woman empowerment in this book though but the poetess transmogrified into a tigress in the poetries “On Women’s Writings” and “Feminine Submissiveness.” She in her transmogrified form stripped the critical issues of feminism and woman empowerment nude through her daggering words echoing as bellows and roars from her spirit, influential to ignite the fire in her feminine readers’ hearts to not let any of their glass ceilings go without smashes.

Apart from all the previously mentioned peculiarities, this book has a lot more in it.

This book does not need any recommendation from anyone as the words in this book are fully presentable in themselves.

Bios and Links

Gabriela Marie Milton:

Gabriela Marie Milton i

s the #1 Amazon bestselling poet and an internationally published author. She is a 2022 Pushcart Prize nominee, the author of the #1 best-selling poetry collection Woman: Splendor and Sorrow: | Love Poems and Poetic Prose (Vita Brevis Press, 2021), and the author of Passions: Love Poems and Other Writings (Vita Brevis Press, 2020). She is also the editor of the #1 Amazon bestselling anthology Wounds I Healed: The Poetry of Strong Women (Experiments in Fiction, 2022).
Her poetry and short prose have appeared in various magazines and anthologies. Under the pen name Gabriela M, she was awarded 2019 Author of the Year at Spillwords Press (NYC). Her piece “If I say I love you” was nominated for 2020 Spillwords Press Publication of the Year (Poetic).
On July 6, 2021, she was featured in New York Glamour Magazine. Her interview can be read at the following link:

“Keep going. Greatness always encounters resistance.”- Gabriela Marie Milton

Spriha Kant:

is a poetess and a book reviewer.
Her poetry The Seashell was published online at Imaginary Land Stories for the first time.
The poetries of Spriha have been published in four anthologies till now:
Sing, Do The Birds of Spring
A Whisper Of Your Love
Hard Rain Poetry: Forever Dylan
Bare Bones Writing Issue 1: Fevers of the mind
Spriha has done six book reviews till now:
The Keeper of Aeons by Matthew MC Smith
Nature Speaks of Love and Sorrow by Jeff Flesch
Washed Away: A Collection of Fragments by Shiksha Dheda
Spaces by Clive Gresswell
Silence From the Shadows by Stuart Matthews
Breathe by Helen Laycock
Spriha has collaborated on the poetry The Doorsteps Series with David L O’ Nan.
Spriha has been a part of the two events celebrating the launches of the books till now:
Nature Speaks of Love and Sorrow by Jeff Flesch
As FolkTaleTeller by Paul Brookes
Her poetic quote “An orphic wind storm blew away a sand dune that heaped all our love memories upon one another.” has been published as the epigraph in the book Magkasintahan Volume VI By Poets and Writers from the Philippines under Ukiyoto Publishing in the year 2022.
Spriha has been featured in the two interviews till now:
Quick-9 Interview on feversofthemind.com
#BrokenAsides with Spriha Kant on the brokenspine.co.uk
Spriha has been featured in Creative Achievements in 2022 on thewombwellrainbow.com.
The links to the features of Spriha Kant are:
https://feversofthemind.com/2022/09/13/a-fevers-of-the-mind-quick-9-interview-with-poetess-spriha-kant/
https://thebrokenspine.co.uk/2022/12/07/brokenasides-with-spriha-kant/

#CelebrateYourCreativeAchievementsOf2022 Calling all poets/short prose writers/artworkers between 26-31st December I want to celebrate your creativity over the last year. Please email me a list, plus bio, links and so on. Soon as possible. Today we celebrate the achievements in 2022 of Spriha Kant

Remembering Elisabeth, Pepys’s Wife – Reading the 1663 Pepys Diaries

wendycatpratt's avatarWendy Pratt

I have somehow fallen into a January ritual of reading one year of Samuel Pepys’s diaries as my first book of the year, every year. I’ve done so since 2020, starting with 1660. I’m currently up to mid September of this year’s diary, 1663. The diaries are a fascinating glimpse of the every day life of someone who is a fairly ordinary person working their way up in an administrative job. There’s a lot about the navy and the admiralty in the diaries, a lot of interesting stuff about Charles II and the way the court and parliament worked. But for me the really interesting bits are always the human encounters. There seems to be a lot of trouble with turds in Pepys’s world; lots of basements flooded with crap. Sanitation is still a bit random in London in the 1660s. Each year he is intent on bettering himself; always…

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Today is #NationalHatDay . Please join John Hawkhead and I in celebrating hats. I will feature your published/unpublished poetry/short prose/artworks about about/featuring hats. A photo would be good too. Please include a short third person bio

shadowland breeze
grandpa tips his cap
to the magpie

ink drawing and poem by John Hawkhead

1st Place, 2016 Mandy’s Pages Annual Tanka Contest

By Debbie Strange

Kimberly Kuchar

 

Bios and Links

Kimberly Kuchar

is addicted to writing short-form poetry. Her work has appeared in multiple journals, including Wales Haiku Journal, Scarlet Dragonfly Journal, Cold Moon Journal, Suspect Device, and horror senryu journal. She lives near Austin, Texas, with her husband, son, and pet cockatiel.

John Hawkhead

is a writer and illustrator whose short-form poetry has been published all over the world and has won many competitions. His book of haiku and senryu ‘Small Shadows’ is available directly from him or Alba Publishing

Debbie Strange (Canada)i

is a chronically ill short-form poet and artist whose creative passions connect her more closely to the world, to others, and to herself. Thousands of her poems and artworks have been published worldwide. Please visit Debbie’s archive at https://debbiemstrange.blogspot.com/ and follow her on Twitter @Debbie_Strange.

“Created Responses To This Day” Petar Penda responds to Day 189 of my This Day images. I would love to feature your responses too.

Bio

Petar Penda

is a professor of English and American literature (University of Banja Luka, Bosnia and Herzegovina), literary critic, and translator. His translations have been published in renowned journals in the USA and the UK. His poetry and flash fiction have been published in “Fevers of the Mind”, “Lothlorien Poetry Journal”, “A Thin Slice of Anxiety”, “Trouvaille Review”, ” Amphora”, and other journals.

“Created Responses To This Day” Peter Penda responds to Day 189 of my This Day images. I would love to feature your responses too.

Bio

Petar Penda is a professor of English and American literature (University of Banja Luka, Bosnia and Herzegovina), literary critic, and translator. His translations have been published in renowned journals in the USA and the UK. His poetry and flash fiction have been published in “Fevers of the Mind”, “Lothlorien Poetry Journal”, “A Thin Slice of Anxiety”, “Trouvaille Review”, ” Amphora”, and other journals.

Featured Poet on Honesty Poetry

merrildsmith's avatarYesterday and today: Merril's historical musings

I am honored and very pleased to have two poems featured on Samantha Terrell’s Honesty Poetry Site. Samantha has invented a contrapuntal poetry form called trinitas. She has published two of my poems written in this format, and written in response to her call. The theme was “unity.” I find the form challenging, but also fun to write. Thank you very much, Samantha! You can read the poems here.

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Darkness Between Stars by John F. Deane & James Harpur (The Irish Pages Press)

tearsinthefence's avatarTears in the Fence

The authors’ own Introduction to this beautifully produced hardback book notes that Deane and Harpur

have known each other for many years and shared readings,
discussions and introduced each other’s work, finding friendship
and mutual encouragement in discovering that [they] were both
fascinated not only by the life of poetry but also by the divine,
the sacred, ‘God’.

It is this fascination, and the writing out of it, which underpins this ‘joint selection’ of poems: although there are poems about a wide range of subjects, they are, the authors suggest, ‘poems in search of God’, poems which ‘bear witness to […] probings into the ineffable’.

This raises two issues. Firstly, I hoped for more of a poetic conversation, and not a selection of poems by each author, the one followed by the other; perhaps even new work, produced in collaboration or as a direct response to the other’s work. Secondly…

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A Census of Preconceptions by Oz Hardwick (Survision Books)

tearsinthefence's avatarTears in the Fence

Oz Hardwick prose poems are short moments captured from what the author, in ‘Out of Town’, says is ‘Beyond the range of church bells’, where ‘time follows its own instincts’. These gently surreal poems slur time, jump time, and revel in experiential time, where action ceases or slows, allowing the poet time to breathe, take note, follow trains and trails of thought and share them with his readers.

In ‘The Coming of the Comet’, for instance, the original observation of the comet’s trails as ‘fragmented nursery rhymes’ (sky writing) allows the author to imagine reaching up to touch them, although he fears getting his fingers burnt, metaphorically and literally. Then the text undertakes a sideways move towards the ducks who have already flown away from the winter, which allows a digression about other creatures, before the poem swerves into myth and nursery rhymes, with a dying dragon returning us to…

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#TheWombwellRainbow #PoeticFormsChallenge. It is weekly. Seventeen form a #RINNARD. I will post the challenge to create a first draft of a poetic form by the following late Sunday. Please email your first draft to me, including an updated short, third person bio and a short prose piece about the challenges you faced and how you overcame them. Except when I’m working at the supermarket I am always ready to help those that get stuck. I will blog my progress throughout the week. Hopefully it may help the stumped. Also below please find links to helpful websites.

The rinnard or roinnard is an Irish poetic form.

It has the following guidelines:

An example first:

 

Quatrain (or four-line) poem (or stanzas).

Six-syllable lines.

Two-syllable rhymes at the end of each line.

Rhyme scheme for each quatrain: abcb.

The “a” and “c” words consonate with the “b” words

Usually an alcill rhyme between lines three and four.

Note on aicill rhyme:

An aicill rhyme in this poem means that the final syllable of line three rhymes somewhere in line four (usually the middle).

Helpful Links

https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/rinnard-poetic-forms