Guest Feature – Flashback 3

Patricia M Osborne's avatarPatricia M Osborne

Back in November I invited you to recap or visit guest features up to end of July 2022. Now Patricia’s Pen is back with more flashbacks, this time to the end of the year. Please re-visit the blogs or read for the first time.

Guest Features – Flashback 3

Kicking Flashback 3 off for August2022 was Lucy Heuschen with the launch of We Wear The Crown. Through poetry Lucy shares her breast cancer journey with the reader. This collection is a must read.

Read Lucy Heuschen’s blog here

Next up for August was Damien B Donnelly blogging about his Parisian experience in his brand new collection Enough! Don’t miss a second chance to have a read.

Read Damien B Donnelly’s blog here

September2022 opened with Kate Rose and her new release Brushstrokes. Kate takes her inspiration from her surroundings. Nature, both the natural world and human nature…

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Golden shovel

Jane Dougherty's avatarJane Dougherty Writes

Paul Brookes’ chosen poetic form last week was the golden shovel. I’ve seen the name before but never understood from reading the poems what it was. Well, now I know and I’ve dutifully persevered and written some. The form is supposed to be more than just an exercise, but to demand creativity from the poet (aren’t all forms supposed to do that?), but I’m obviously stuck at the contortionist exercise stage because I’m not seeing much poetry in my attempts. Here is the poem I sent to Paul’s challenge. It’s based (pretty obviously) on the first line of Byron’s She walks in beauty.

Tree beauty

There are old men trees and some I call she,
wild women trees, shelter where the hind walks.
Breathe out and breathe in.
Tree-breath is powerful, and tree-beauty,
the powerful beauty of nature, like
mountains and rivers, ice-caps, the
lungs of the world, pumping…

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“Created Responses To This Day” John Hawkhead responds to Day 72 of my This Day images. I would love to feature your responses too.

‘Industrial Legacy’

Now joint-oil curdles
in our knees and elbows
and fingers of decay
lick at our creaking heels
you suggest valves
propose grease nipples
vaunt the possibilities
of replacement parts
in recycled plastics
while I in my muddled head
just crave lubrication
and the cooling mind fog
of being left alone.

-John Hawkhead

“Created Responses To This Day” Kushal Poddar responds to Day 50 images. I would love to feature your responses too.

The Directions Speed Takes

Speed shakes the line between
the lights rooting their shapes
and the shadows that imitate
the beginning from the end.

Slow down! We already reached
where we would live a life
we are meant to lead. Slow down.
It is our midlife crisis.

The lanes hiss. The signals blink.
Fogsome night coils a carol
for the fag-end of the month.
Corde natus ex Parentis. I murmur.

-Kushal Poddar

#TheWombwellRainbow #Poeticformschallenge last week was a #GoldenShovel. Enjoy examples by Tim Fellows and Jane Dougherty and read how they felt when writing one.

Ruins

When a civilisation falls, we observe these
events from distance; see reflections, find fragments
of lives that leave ghost-shadows. Lives that you or I
can’t comprehend, rocks and dust and skeletons that have
stopped dancing. We fail to see ourselves; we have shored
our own minds against death. We try to push against
the forces of time and space. Where is my
salvation now? What thoughts are left but ruins?

Chickens

So.
You wanted so much
to see the Himalayas. Your mind depends
on stimulation, upon
the lived experience that only a
trip to the mountains, or a red
desert can fulfil; the constant turning of a wheel.
On seeing the long barrow,
your eyes glazed
with tears, you said I should never have come with
you, that I brought only rain
where sun should be. And here we are; a glass of water
with the many pills on the table beside
the bed where I lie, where you lie. You say that the

sheets seem very clean and white
but you have to go; you need to feed your chickens.

How Did It Go?
The first has a line from The Waste Land as its inspiration and and the second uses all of William Carlos Williams’ Red Wheelbarrow.

Tree beauty

There are old men trees and some I call she,
wild women trees, shelter where the hind walks.
Breathe out and breathe in.
Tree-breath is powerful, and tree-beauty,
the powerful beauty of nature, like
mountains and rivers, ice-caps, the
lungs of the world, pumping day and night.

How did it go?

I tried this form several times before I got a poem that I was satisfied with. I picked some favourite lines and realised that, like most phrases, they contained several articles and conjunctions, none of which make good end-of-line words. The result of my first attempts looked arbitrary in a contrived way. I got there in the end and will try this form again, though I will never be persuaded that ending a line with ‘the’ or ‘a’ is poetic.

Join me every day this December. #RewildTheMundane and/or #ReMundaneTheWild. Nineteenth Day. NOTE: NO WILD THINGS MUST DIE IN THESE SCENARIOS. I look forward to your draft poetry/short fiction/visual images. Go leftfield and imagine a fridge as a wild animal or plant, imagine a wild animal or plant as a fridge, or other domestic object, or task. Email me or add your contribution to this link.

 

 

 

 

 

Leftfield Questions

How is an Osprey like a fridge ?

What mundane task would a living Osprey do in a home?

How would a fridge be rewilded?

Re-wilding the mundane day 18

Jane Dougherty's avatarJane Dougherty Writes

For Paul Brookes’ December challenge. I really couldn’t answer these questions about shower-cleaning voles, so here’s a cop-out poem about a water vole just being clean and tidy.

Water vole

Wild in the water,
no more home than a hole
in a muddy bank,

a spick and span round hole
above the flood line perhaps
and perhaps not.

Out of sight of slit-slant fox eyes,
the ferreting marten,
the heron’s beak.

Ripples run, a V of silver
from nose apex,
ephemeral disturbance
of the silken skin of the stream.

Still returns, spick and span,
wild water unruffled,
wild water vole homed.

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Join me every day this December. #RewildTheMundane and/or #ReMundaneTheWild. Eighteenth Day. NOTE: NO WILD THINGS MUST DIE IN THESE SCENARIOS. I look forward to your draft poetry/short fiction/visual images. Go leftfield and imagine cleaning the bath/shower as a wild animal or plant, imagine a wild animal or plant as cleaning the bath/shower, or other domestic object, or task. Email me or add your contribution to this link.

 

Leftfield Questions

How is a water vole like cleaning the bath/shower?

What mundane task would a living water vole do in a home?

How would cleaning the bath/shower be rewilded?