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I had to listen to this tale of revenge several times as it built up to its climax because I wanted to be sure I could see every aspect of the story developing. Using ‘buying another drink’ to lead onto the next section increased the tension beautifully. Very good
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I had to listen to this tale of revenge several times as it built up to its climax because I wanted to be sure I could see every aspect of the story developing. Using ‘buying another drink’ to lead onto the next section increased the tension beautifully. Very good