Some notes on verbal music

Billy Mills's avatarElliptical Movements

The April 1913 issue of Poetry magazine contained this now-famous short poem by Ezra Pound:

In a Station of the Metro

The apparition of these faces in the crowd:
Petals on a wet, black bough.

This printing of the poem in the New Freewomanon 15 August is notable for reproducing Pound’s original spacing, an innovation he explained to Poetry editor Harriet Munroe in a letter of March 30th: ‘In the ‘Metro’ hokku, I was careful, I think, to indicate spaces between the rhythmic units, and I want them observed’[i]. I imagine that the explanation was intended to overcome objections by either Munroe or her printer (or possibly both) to Pound’s irregular requirements, and that similar objections may be why the layout was dropped in all other printings of the poem.

Pound’s explanation is interesting in its echoing of the last of the three principles that…

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Wildness Day 16

Jane Dougherty's avatarThe Four Swans

For Paul’s Wildness challenge. I hope he doesn’t mind that I seem to be taking what we call the contre-pied rather often.

Haibun for the excluded

I never have felt, and never will feel, that I am part of what we call nature. I observe, yearn to be, to enter into that wild dimension framed by grass stalks, moving, coloured air, and the million scents I will never know. Like watching a cricket match, a film in Urdu, the grinning teeth of golden people on a yacht. On the outside, beyond an unseen wall, looking in, understanding nothing.

Kestrel hovers
fearless or just ignorant
of our gravity.

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16 June: The Stars Fall Sideways

Misky's avatarIt's Still Life

in the style of green and yellow rolling hills, sheep, watercolour painting, created by Midjourney.

Day 16. Describe a special moment when you felt truly connected to nature.

When the Stars Fall Sideways

It’s not the poetic fill
of a challis-filled lake between
the rising foothills of the Alps,

or
the memory of season’s change,
or Orion’s star-embellished belt,
or autumn walnuts roasting

or
the first snowflake falling

or
the look back over my shoulder
at the moon, fixed firm as
privilege amongst its planets

or
finding a perfect seashell
as I walk the beach.

No, it’s none of those things,
because

what connects me
is the scent of green and gold of fields,
and knowing

that stars always fall sideways over Sussex.


139 words. Written for Paul’s #thewildness challenge, Day 16: Describe a moment when you felt truly connected to nature. Artwork is created using Midjourney. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

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#TheWildness. Day 16. Describe a special moment when you felt truly connected to nature. What did it teach you about yourself and the world around you? Please join Jane Dougherty and me in celebrating wildness all this month. I tried to get permission from the Wildlife Trust to use their #3ODaysWild as prompts but it was not forthcoming, so here are my own prompts with a little help from chatgbt. I will feature your draft published/unpublished poetry/short prose/artworks using the following prompts. Please include a short third person bio. Numbers refer to dates in June: Day 1. Describe the sounds you hear when you step outside your home. How does nature contribute to this musical work? 2. Write a letter to a tree or plant that you encounter on your daily walk. What would you say to it? 3. Imagine you could transform into any animal for a day. Which animal would you choose and why? 4. Write a short story about a magical encounter with a wild animal in your backyard. 5. Describe a peaceful moment spent observing a body of water. What emotions does it evoke in you? 6. Write a poem inspired by the vibrant colours and patterns of a butterfly’s wings. 7. Imagine you are a wildlife photographer. Describe the most breathtaking picture you have taken during your challenge. 8. Write about a favourite childhood memory spent in nature. How did it shape your connection with the natural world? 9. Create a dialogue between two different species of birds perched on a branch. What would they talk about? 10. Describe the texture and scent of wildflowers you encounter on your nature walks. How do they make you feel? 11. Write a persuasive essay on the importance of conserving and protecting local wildlife habitats. 12. Imagine you are a nature guide. Describe a walk you would take visitors on to showcase the beauty and diversity of your local environment. 13. Write a poem about the changing seasons and how they affect the behaviour of wildlife. 14. Imagine you are a detective investigating the disappearance of a rare animal. Describe your search for clues in the natural world. 15. Write a poem/flash fiction about a mischievous squirrel that causes chaos in your garden. 16. Describe a special moment when you felt truly connected to nature. What did it teach you about yourself and the world around you? 17. Write a letter to future generations, urging them to protect and cherish the natural world. 18. Create a detailed observation log of a specific species of bird that you have been monitoring throughout the challenge. 19. Write a poem inspired by the soothing sounds of a flowing stream or river. 20. Imagine you are a nature-inspired artist. Describe the masterpiece you would create using materials found in the great outdoors. 21. Write a short story about a group of friends who embark on an unforgettable camping trip in the wilderness. 22. Describe the most fascinating insect you have encountered during your challenge. What makes it unique? 23. Write a diary entry from the perspective of a tree, chronicling its experiences and the changes it witnesses over the course of a year. 24. Imagine you could communicate with one animal species. Which species would you choose and what would you ask them? 25. Describe a magical sunrise or sunset you have witnessed during your journey. How did it make you feel? 26. Write a letter to a future self, reflecting on the impact of the challenge on your relationship with nature. 27. Imagine you are a character in a wildlife-themed adventure novel. Describe the perilous situation you find yourself in and how you escape. 28. Write a poem celebrating the diversity and resilience of nature, even in the face of human challenges. 29. Describe the feeling of walking barefoot on cool, damp grass. How does it connect you to the Earth? 30. Write a short story about a hidden, enchanted forest where magical creatures dwell. What adventures await those who discover it? Feel free to adapt these prompts to suit your writing style or preferences.

The Wombwell Rainbow moment of inception

Haibun for the excluded

I never have felt, and never will feel, that I am part of what we call nature. I observe, yearn to be, to enter into that wild dimension framed by grass stalks, moving, coloured air, and the million scents I will never know. Like watching a cricket match, a film in Urdu, the grinning teeth of golden people on a yacht. On the outside, beyond an unseen wall, looking in, understanding nothing.

Kestrel hovers
fearless or just ignorant
of our gravity.

Bios and Links

Jane Dougherty

lives and works in southwest France. A Pushcart Prize nominee, her poems and stories have been published in magazines and journals including Ogham Stone, the Ekphrastic Review, Black Bough Poetry, ink sweat and tears, Gleam, Nightingale & Sparrow, Green Ink and Brilliant Flash Fiction. She blogs at https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/ Her poetry chapbooks, thicker than water and birds and other feathers were published in October and November 2020.

Because I love you, I become war by Eileen R. Tabios (Marsh Hawk Press)

tearsinthefence's avatarTears in the Fence

Some people think I’m a hyperactive writer. A reviewer in Exeter once suggested that either I was one of those names used by a group of individuals or that I had been cloned. Goodness knows what they would make of the extensive two page list of publications by Eileen R. Tabios at the start of this book!Because I love you…is subtitled ‘Poems and Uncollected Poetics Prose’ and contains an unruly mix of the experimental, the imagistic, the political, the conceptual and the explanatory; the author is very, very present throughout.

I don’t mean this is confessional poetry. Tabios knows all about Kenneth Goldsmith’s and others’ theories of re-presentation, collage, processual writing, flarf, variations, responses to and ‘translations’ of work; she’s invented forms (the Hay(na)ku), has an acute sense of poetics, but is adamant about how, even when using ‘the potential randomness of line combinations to create new poems’…

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15 June: #thewildness Grey Squirrel

Misky's avatarIt's Still Life

drawing of a grey squirrel in the garden. Mushrooms, flowers, watercolour and pen.

Day 15. Write a poem/flash fiction about a mischievous squirrel that causes chaos in your garden.

A Grey Squirrel

There’s a grey squirrel
in the lavender, in the chives

with blossoms gone to seed
and faded in the sun,

it’s drinking from the saucer
set below the dill, and now it’s

running through the ferns
between the spiky spires.

It stops at the pond, watches
frogs and newts, and runs

across the patio, on the table,
and off the chair. A squirrel’s

staring at me
through the open door.


Written for Day 15 of #thewildness Challenge. Artwork is created using Midjourney. Imagery and poems ©Misky 2023.

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#TheWildness. Day 15. Write a poem/flash fiction about a mischievous squirrel that causes chaos in your garden. Please join Jane Dougherty, Misky and me in celebrating wildness all this month. I tried to get permission from the Wildlife Trust to use their #3ODaysWild as prompts but it was not forthcoming, so here are my own prompts with a little help from chatgbt. I will feature your draft published/unpublished poetry/short prose/artworks using the following prompts. Please include a short third person bio. Numbers refer to dates in June: Day 1. Describe the sounds you hear when you step outside your home. How does nature contribute to this musical work? 2. Write a letter to a tree or plant that you encounter on your daily walk. What would you say to it? 3. Imagine you could transform into any animal for a day. Which animal would you choose and why? 4. Write a short story about a magical encounter with a wild animal in your backyard. 5. Describe a peaceful moment spent observing a body of water. What emotions does it evoke in you? 6. Write a poem inspired by the vibrant colours and patterns of a butterfly’s wings. 7. Imagine you are a wildlife photographer. Describe the most breathtaking picture you have taken during your challenge. 8. Write about a favourite childhood memory spent in nature. How did it shape your connection with the natural world? 9. Create a dialogue between two different species of birds perched on a branch. What would they talk about? 10. Describe the texture and scent of wildflowers you encounter on your nature walks. How do they make you feel? 11. Write a persuasive essay on the importance of conserving and protecting local wildlife habitats. 12. Imagine you are a nature guide. Describe a walk you would take visitors on to showcase the beauty and diversity of your local environment. 13. Write a poem about the changing seasons and how they affect the behaviour of wildlife. 14. Imagine you are a detective investigating the disappearance of a rare animal. Describe your search for clues in the natural world. 15. Write a poem/flash fiction about a mischievous squirrel that causes chaos in your garden. 16. Describe a special moment when you felt truly connected to nature. What did it teach you about yourself and the world around you? 17. Write a letter to future generations, urging them to protect and cherish the natural world. 18. Create a detailed observation log of a specific species of bird that you have been monitoring throughout the challenge. 19. Write a poem inspired by the soothing sounds of a flowing stream or river. 20. Imagine you are a nature-inspired artist. Describe the masterpiece you would create using materials found in the great outdoors. 21. Write a short story about a group of friends who embark on an unforgettable camping trip in the wilderness. 22. Describe the most fascinating insect you have encountered during your challenge. What makes it unique? 23. Write a diary entry from the perspective of a tree, chronicling its experiences and the changes it witnesses over the course of a year. 24. Imagine you could communicate with one animal species. Which species would you choose and what would you ask them? 25. Describe a magical sunrise or sunset you have witnessed during your journey. How did it make you feel? 26. Write a letter to a future self, reflecting on the impact of the challenge on your relationship with nature. 27. Imagine you are a character in a wildlife-themed adventure novel. Describe the perilous situation you find yourself in and how you escape. 28. Write a poem celebrating the diversity and resilience of nature, even in the face of human challenges. 29. Describe the feeling of walking barefoot on cool, damp grass. How does it connect you to the Earth? 30. Write a short story about a hidden, enchanted forest where magical creatures dwell. What adventures await those who discover it? Feel free to adapt these prompts to suit your writing style or preferences.

Cemetery Squirrel photo by Paul Brookes

Red rush

Autumn leafred,
panache a swirling lick of flame,
quick as wildfire,
riffling through the trees,
a wild wind,

leap, pirouette,
daredevil dancing,
a squirrel child laughs,
makes a hopscotch game
of going home.

Jane Dougherty

Red Squirrel

A shiver
in the branches of the copper
beech – bare still, spring’s shimmer
not yet budded – and now you leap, skitter

along
the wall and down
the wooden gatepost, then bound,
ears pert, tail long, across the March-damp ground

to clamber
up the viburnum
on which the peanut feeder
hangs: robins, coal tits and finches scatter.

Crouched
upon a branch,
front paws to mouth, round-haunched,
tail fluffed and crimped across your back, you munch

on peanuts
ferociously, as
I, confined, watch through the glass
of the window. Your obsidian eyes meet my gaze.

Marian Christie

‘Red Squirrel’ was first published in Allegro Poetry Magazine #18, September 2018.

Bios and Links 

Jane Dougherty

lives and works in southwest France. A Pushcart Prize nominee, her poems and stories have been published in magazines and journals including Ogham Stone, the Ekphrastic Review, Black Bough Poetry, ink sweat and tears, Gleam, Nightingale & Sparrow, Green Ink and Brilliant Flash Fiction. She blogs at https://janedougherty.wordpress.com/ Her poetry chapbooks, thicker than water and birds and other feathers were published in October and November 2020.

Marian Christie

is from Harare, Zimbabwe. She lived in various countries in Africa, Europe and the Middle East before moving to her present home in southeast England.
Marian has published two books of poetry, Fractal Poems and Triangles, with Penteract Press, and a book of essays with Beir Bua Press: From Fibs to Fractals: exploring mathematical forms in poetry. She is currently co-editing an anthology of poetry by Zimbabwean women, to be published by Carnelian Heart in autumn 2023.
Marian blogs at http://www.marianchristiepoetry.net and is on Twitter @marian_v_o.

Poetry Showcase: David L O’Nan (inspired by Prince)

davidlonan1's avatarFevers of the Mind

Honeysuckle Love

I became blind, when your stinger caught my eye
I dined on your sweetness, your addiction was prime.
Like a honeysuckle love, your drip is too sticky to define.
Deeper than any spice or sin, beautiful angelic angry buzz.

Honeysuckle love, more than a feeling, it was more than tingling in my blood.
Honeysuckle love, my heart's soft healing, but it's beating like a drum.
Vacuous to the nectar you have strewn. I've got the devilish mind when the sheets begin floating off the bed.

Those ruby lips and cursive hips, make the movement more lucid.
She's the melody to my soul, And the rhythm is pushy and juicy.
With every breath, uhh...and every step I,
I feel her touch my bubbling skin.  The heat is a boil,  And i've dreamt every dream i've ever dreamt.  

I know what good love love is all about.

Love Themes from…

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A Poetry Showcase: Vikki C. (author of “The Art of Glass Houses”)

davidlonan1's avatarFevers of the Mind

Bio:

Vikki C., is a British-born writer, poet and musician from London whose literary works are inspired by science, spirituality, existentialism, surrealism and the human condition.

She is the author of ‘The Art of Glass Houses’ (Alien Buddha Press) – a debut chapbook of poetry and prose exploring the human experience through the liminal spaces of memory, place, heritage, art and existentialism.

Vikki’s poetry and prose are widely published, both in print and online journals and anthologies. Her work appears or is forthcoming in publications such as EcoTheo Review, Ellipsis Zine, Black Bough Poetry, Acropolis Journal, Nightingale & Sparrow, Loft Books, DarkWinter Literary Magazine, Across The Margin, Literary Revelations, Lazuli Literary Group, Spare Parts Lit and other venues.

As a musician and spoken word artist, Vikki’s writing, spoken poetry and musical compositions have played a role in various audio collaborations. In 2022, her voice and poetry were featured on Iambic…

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Poetry by David L O’Nan inspired by Marilyn Monroe “The Thievery of Marilyn”

davidlonan1's avatarFevers of the Mind

The Thievery of Marilyn

We must all suffer through the rings to the prisons We must go from the ugliest to the gossling. We must slip from stardom to the depression. The silk nights and the bleeding knocks at the doors. In '63, after Marilyn's death, The world was left whipped into the permanence of a heavy breath. The loss was so great, the stars dripped like leaky faucets, The sadness and the lewd collaborated into obedient crying. They couldn't believe that she has was gone, A life cut short, a tragedy that was the invention of some mob. As if she was took from us, but she was far from herself. With all that she had to give, the arrogance wanted more. That darkness consumed her, her spirit was caught in that cage. Just smile little Marilyn, they'd say. The money, the fame. The elite is watching. The elite…

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