Line Breaks in Free Verse, a Handy Guide

angelatopping's avatarAngela Topping

I’ve recently been asked how to do line breaks in free verse, so I thought I would share it with my readers. As T.S. Eliot said: ‘No verse is libre for the man who wants to do a good job.’ (Though of course he meant women too!)

In formal verse (written with a set rhyme and metre) the convention allows the sense to run on from line to line and stanza to stanza; the flexibility of this is vital to prevent the pattern becoming a straightjacket. These enjambed lines are read over the line break, because the form is dictating where the line break is made, not the sense or the voice.

Free verse deals very differently with line breaks. The poet has an opportunity to manipulate them and use them purposefully. Free verse has a subtler rhythm than formal verse, and though is does include rhymes, they are not…

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The Poetry Police

angelatopping's avatarAngela Topping

There has been something of a controversy recently in the poetry goldfish bowl. I don’t want to get into the McNish versus Watts debate, because I can see both sides, but from a range of comments on the offending article in P.N.Review, an interesting discussion has been going on about what the ‘rules’ or conventions of poetry are. There are people who feel only poems which rhyme can be called poems. Others extol the virtues of punctuation, learning about scansion and metre, and being well versed in the reading of poetry by other people. This is the debate that constantly rumbles on. What IS poetry?

A poem is not defined by the toolbox it uses. A different poem by the same poet might be conventional, with rhyming, scanning quatrains, or it might be loose, open field, intertexual, or anything at all. For my money, I let the poem get involved…

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Applauding between Poems

angelatopping's avatarAngela Topping

When I first started giving readings of my work, in the late 80s, poets were asked to read for 45 minutes, in most cases, if they were headlining, with a Q&A session to follow. People listened attentively, the poet made a few comments sometimes between poems, things that were interesting, things that were not in the poem itself.
These days it’s much more likely to be given a headline slot of up to 30 minutes, and sometimes, when reading with other poets, ten minutes may be all that is given. This isn’t a bad thing; it makes for poetry events which include a lot more variety, especially when the readers are professional in sticking to their time slots. There is also a proliferation of open mic spots and even whole events dedicated to open mics. Again, no bad things, especially with so many people writing these days, who all need…

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The Title of Poet: praise word or description?

angelatopping's avatarAngela Topping

There has been discussion about what a poet is and whether one can confer the title on oneself. I was tentative for a long time about calling myself a poet. Many say a poet is someone who writes poems. But what makes something a poem? When I was a very young poet (13 or 14), I used to show my work to people and ask’ is this a poem?’ by which I meant ‘does it do what poems are meant to do, is it magic?’That is why I don’t believe in bad poems, if it’s bad, it’s not a poem. William Carlos Williams said ‘if it ain’t a pleasure, it ain’t a poem’.
By calling oneself a poet, if one simply means that one writes poems, I don’t have an issue with that. But the secondary definition is that a poet is a ‘person with great imagination and creativity’. I…

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On being a young poet

angelatopping's avatarAngela Topping

When I was a young poet, inexperienced and clueless about publishing, I used to read poetry widely, discovering and taking home books from Widnes library to devour at my leisure. I kept a folder of poems which I could not live without: when I had to return the books, I’d copy out my favourite ones. I still have this file. The poems in it all helped to tune me in to the craft.

I was writing seriously from the age of 14, and used to put together collections of my poems, all neatly copied out, and get people to read them. I was fond of saying to my readers: ‘is THIS a poem?’ ‘And THIS?’ I was published in the school magazine. I made all the usual mistakes that teens often do: big words, portentous style, abstractions. But I kept at it. I was highly commended in a W. H…

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A Tribute to Anne Stevenson

angelatopping's avatarAngela Topping

Although I did not know Anne Stevenson well, I feel I must pay tribute to her, one small voice among the many tributes which will be written to say farewell to this fine poet and generous encourager of other poets.

I met her, as I met the late-lamented U. A . Fanthorpe, through my beloved friend Matt Simpson (1936-2009). He and Anne were of an age, and she was saddened by his death, like all his friends. For her 70th birthday, Matt Simpson and his friend John Lucas (Shoestring Press and also a fine poet, Jazz player and lecturer) created a marvellous festschrift, The Way You Say the World, with a large number of well-known poets as contributors. I was delighted to be asked to send a poem, and even more so to be asked to read it on the night of her party. Matt and I trundled up…

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Wombwell Rainbow Interviews: Alice Frecknall

Wombwell Rainbow Interviews

I am honoured and privileged that the following writers local, national and international have agreed to be interviewed by me. I gave the writers three options: an emailed list of questions or a more fluid interview via messenger, or an interview about their latest book, or a combination of these.

The usual ground is covered about motivation, daily routines and work ethic, but some surprises too. Some of these poets you may know, others may be new to you. I hope you enjoy the experience as much as I do.

Alice Frecknall website front page

Alice Frecknall

is a poet, short fiction writer, and fine artist. Her debut poetry collection is forthcoming from Out-Spoken Press in 2021 and is supported by Arts Council England. Her writing has been published online by Out-Spoken, has appeared in print in a number of anthologies, including The Stinging Fly, National Poetry Anthology, and Lightship Anthology, and was shortlisted for the Out-Spoken Prize for Poetry 2019 and the Lightship International Short Story Prize. Alice has an MA in Creative Writing from the University of Hull, is a Roundhouse Poetry Collective alumna, and member of the UniSlam Post-Emerging Cohort. She has read her work at venues and festivals across the country and regularly writes with the Poetry Takeaway. 

https://www.alicefrecknall.com/

@alice_frecknall

https://www.instagram.com/alice_frecknall/

The Interview

1. When and why did you start writing poetry?

At around the age of 16, I think. At that point it was very much a back-of-the-notebook secret endeavour. I didn’t really read much poetry outside of school and most of what I was openly writing was fiction – I still write short stories now as well – but writing poetry came out of a sense of urgency, the need to get something out. I’ve always been more comfortable with writing than talking and so poetry was a way of making sense, of exorcising my thoughts and feelings as a teenager trying to navigate the world around me.

2. Who introduced you to poetry?

I don’t think there was one person or artist. It was gradual. At an early age I was probably more familiar with poetry in theatre, through Shakespeare, as that was my parents’ interest. It wasn’t until my late teens and early twenties that I began to read more widely and independently. I also started listening to poetry, the work of artists such as Kae Tempest, Hollie McNish, Andrea Gibson… I studied literature and creative writing at university and the more poetry I was exposed to, the more I came to love and appreciate it as an artform. At that time there were also open mic nights starting to pop up around Hull, where I was living, so then I was introduced to live poetry and people who were writing and sharing their work much more readily. The idea of having some sort of lived life as a writer began to feel tangible.

3. How aware are and were you of the dominating presence of older poets traditional and contemporary?

When I was at school, the poets on the curriculum were mostly, if not exclusively, dead, white men. And this was my main access to poetry. If I remember correctly, the anthology we studied at GCSE was a book of war poetry filled with traditional, often famous, old poems. I was definitely aware of this dominance but didn’t have the knowledge or tools (or confidence) to counter it.

I think poetry as a sector has definitely become more varied in terms of ages and writing styles of the poets who are making waves. Now, thanks to funding schemes and development opportunities, young poets can come through and make a name for themselves, whereas those who are older can find getting those breaks more challenging because those same opportunities are closed to them. At the same time, those who are young in age are often assumed to be young in craft or experience so may not be given the platforms that an older artist would. Age is such an unhelpful thing because life isn’t linear in the way society tries to force it to be.

4. What is your daily writing routine?

Honest answer: I don’t have one.

Not a consistent one, anyway. I’m a fine artist as well as a writer so I have to make space for both, and that is rarely an equal split. If I’m working on a painting commission then that will have to take priority over writing for a period, simply because I need the daylight to paint by and I’m often on a deadline. Similarly, if I have a writing deadline or project on the go then that will take my focus for as long as it needs to and I’ll work quite full, intense days for a time. I also work part-time outside of my creative practices so my available time and existing commitments across the days of the week are quite varied. 

But a writing day will almost always start with coffee and reading before I actually take to my desk to do any writing. I mostly work at home and prefer to write in quiet unless I’m deliberately writing from music as a stimulus, which is rare. I try to keep several pieces of work on the go at once, all at varying stages of completion so I can move between starting new work, editing existing drafts, or submitting work for consideration to publications. And at some point, usually when my head’s at the jumbled, saturated stage, I’ll take a break to head outside for a walk and let the ideas shake themselves down into order.     

5. What subjects motivate your writing?

I think every subject I fixate on through my writing can probably be boiled down to people and/or human experience. Which sounds broad but, ultimately, I’m interested in why people behave in the ways that they do, why we need one another and also destroy one another in a multitude of ways.

6. What is your work ethic?

In its most simple form, my work ethic is: show up. This could mean spending eight hours at my desk, but it could also mean going for a walk, or reading one page of a book, or giving myself a day off. It’s about remaining open and active but meeting myself where I’m at.

7. How did the writers you read when you were young influence your work today?

I don’t remember reading much poetry when I was younger, so my earlier influences were all fiction writers. Philip Pullman’s Dark Materials trilogy really got me into a love of storytelling, and I do tend to write poetry with a sense of story in mind. In my early twenties, I fell in love with Jeanette Winterson’s writing. I revisit her work most years and I definitely take inspiration from her often non-linear and at times surreal style of writing. There’s something really poetic in Winterson’s playfulness of language too. I read a lot of Ali Smith around a similar time, and she’s also very playful in her work. Their writing feels alive to me and very much like it exists in the truth of human experience even if it’s created in a surreal space, which is something I think has come into my own writing.

8. Whom of today’s writers do you admire the most and why?

So many! And it changes all the time. Caroline Bird, she’s such a master of surrealism, and I could listen to her talk for days about poetry and writing; Ella Frears, I absolutely loved her recent debut collection Shine, Darling, I find that I really relate to her work and because she’s a visual artist too, as am I, I really enjoy when that element comes through in her poetry. I couldn’t get over Mary Jean Chan’s collection, Flèche, I thought it was just stunning, I borrowed it from a friend but bought my own copy as soon as I’d returned it because some books you just have to own!

9. Why do you write, as opposed to doing anything else?

Oh wow. Can we open this up to art, more broadly? Though if I knew the answer to this, perhaps I wouldn’t need to anymore…

I think it’s a way of trying to make sense of things and communicate something; a way of getting something out and giving it to someone else in the hope that they might also recognise something in it. It’s about making that human connection. In her book Art Objects Jeanette Winterson writes, ‘I know of no better communicator than art. No better means of saying so precisely those things which need so urgently to be said.’ I think this is why I make art. Art is the best tool I have to make sense of, communicate my experience of the world, and connect with others.

10. What would you say to someone who asked you “How do you become a writer?”

If you’re a writer, you’re a writer. If you want to try and turn that into a career and an income source then, in very practical terms: read, meet writers, meet organisations working with writers, try things out, try more things out, always always study your craft, and keep knocking on doors until the right one opens. Celebrate the wins (no matter how small), and don’t let the rejections mean more than they do.

11. Tell me about the writing projects you have on at the moment.

I’m currently working on my first full-length poetry collection, which will be published by Out-Spoken Press in late 2021. So that’s my main focus. At the moment, I’m really interested in human relationships and how we as humans process or fail to process the things we experience, and the ways in which these experiences can manifest. The collection will largely explore solitude and absence, and the tension between loneliness and the fear/vulnerability of connecting.

#FascinatingInvertebratesWeekend writing and artwork challenge. If anybody wants to DM me, or message me via my WordPress site with their unpublished/published work I will feature it over the weekend.

Resources:

https://www.readingchronicle.co.uk/news/18469199.weird-insects-spotting-garden/

https://www.smithsonianmag.com/science-nature/worlds-most-interesting-insects-180974748/

https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/awesome-ears-the-weird-world-of-insect-hearing/

https://www.growveg.co.uk/guides/the-big-bug-hunt-uncommon-insects/

https://insectlab.russell.wisc.edu/category/uncommon-insects/

https://theconversation.com/every-day-is-halloween-for-these-eerie-insects-86450

Looking forward to your submissions

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Every Fall – Bombus

I read again how males
will rest (just as we
surmised)
at night on flowers
like the tall Helianthus
outside the bedroom
window. Not allowed
back inside the nest.
Just waiting for a chance
to mate. Fresh-raised queens
have more in mind,
the need to fatten up;
each wants to leave
the old, find another
hole underground,
hibernate the winter there
— start a brand-new colony
when spring comes next.

Thus, when you said you’d
not touched the clumps
of re-blooming creeping thyme
and red clover when
you mowed the lawn —
I was glad.

-Elly Nobbs

Katydids

Katydids’ rattle
rises above crickets’ rasp
this mid-August night.

It was ever thus
in dwindling summer, evenings
immemorial.

-Gregory Luce

Delighted that my poem “She Rises Out” appears among brilliant writers Rashid Hasan, Marilyn A Timms, MJDougherty, George W Colkitto, D. E. Green, Jordan Trethewey anisha kaul, Becky Boling, and Yash Seyedbagheri. Thankyou Visual Verse

She Rises Out up at Visual Verse